The Lovers

May 2, 2008

 

Two Hearts so tenderly opened and exposed to love
Quietly beat beneath the heavens above
As secret dreams dance throughout the air
While the mysterious night conceals the loving pair
Whose innocence and love is so pure
That it allows there caring arms hold each other so passionately near
For the echoing nightingales and harmonizing winds surround
As they both realize what they have just found
For precious love is a diamond oh so rare
Beautifully eternal and radiantly fare
Hidden in a sea of sand
Found by patient yielding hands
That guild tender kiss which interlock lovers’ hearts
For not even death can keep them a part.

by Easyrivers

5 Responses to “The Lovers”

  1. Scott Says:

    wow, I love this poem!!
    The emotion and imagery are simply amazing.
    I realy wish that i could write like this!!!
    Keep it up gurl!!!

  2. efelicia14 Says:

    That was beautiful girl.. Such vivid imagry. Also the picture matches pirfectly with the poem itsself.

  3. easyrivers Says:

    @ eFelicia
    Aww, thank you, so much gurl!!
    I totally love the picture, the guy is so cute!!!

    @ scott
    Thank you so much!!! I’ve still got a lot I need to work on!! I really want to improve on my writing.

  4. abey Says:

    it was facinating for two lovers

    • sarangstones Says:

      Aww thank you, abey
      I’m gald that i was able to make it sound that way…
      I’d like to add more to it one day, though.

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