The Lovers
May 2, 2008

Two Hearts so tenderly opened and exposed to love Quietly beat beneath the heavens above As secret dreams dance throughout the air While the mysterious night conceals the loving pair Whose innocence and love is so pure That it allows there caring arms hold each other so passionately near For the echoing nightingales and harmonizing winds surround As they both realize what they have just found For precious love is a diamond oh so rare Beautifully eternal and radiantly fare Hidden in a sea of sand Found by patient yielding hands That guild tender kiss which interlock lovers’ hearts For not even death can keep them a part.
by Easyrivers
May 5, 2008 at 5:34 am
wow, I love this poem!!
The emotion and imagery are simply amazing.
I realy wish that i could write like this!!!
Keep it up gurl!!!
May 6, 2008 at 2:48 am
That was beautiful girl.. Such vivid imagry. Also the picture matches pirfectly with the poem itsself.
May 6, 2008 at 4:30 am
@ eFelicia
Aww, thank you, so much gurl!!
I totally love the picture, the guy is so cute!!!
@ scott
Thank you so much!!! I’ve still got a lot I need to work on!! I really want to improve on my writing.
March 20, 2009 at 2:33 pm
it was facinating for two lovers
March 26, 2009 at 3:32 am
Aww thank you, abey
I’m gald that i was able to make it sound that way…
I’d like to add more to it one day, though.